I break at times
and sing the rhymes
rhymes that raise
feelings divine....
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Hi Prashant - Love the poem - thanks for sharing. Poetry can releasethe Divine in us ans when we are feeling low the 'Bliss of Poetry' lifts us on to higher ground. Yurs through Poetry - JOHN
Feeling divine symoblizes spiritual catharsis...profound...and hopeful in tone!
yet sorrow needs a way for redemption grief when heaves heart ingraining in pain songs from deep of core engraves with creases rhythm of stance unleashes guilt as when told, beautiful write with ingenuity, yet of unique genre by imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing
Yes I agree with comment of my friend Hasmukh :) Sharing the bliss of poems is also what I wish....long time I not heard about you Prashant...only write, continuete! There is lot of you can tell and I'm looking forward on all you will write :) Maria
yes I agree with my friend Hasmukh...sharing the bliss of poetry is also what I wish! Long time I not heard about you....only write, continuete...there is lot of you can tell! of course: +10
vIn grief or relief in trauma or bliss bliss of poetry is all I wish... yes and that is asset with poet.. what elsehe/she can wish// simpley beautiful....10 read mine.. at the top
dear prashant......feeling divine is in away feeling the divinity in you.this poem is sad with vision full of optimism.there is always a silver lining.well done! . ritty
dear prashant......feeling divine is in away feeling the divinity in you.this poem is sad with vision full of optimism.there is always a silver lining.well done! . ritty
i like the form! i live for new ones... i like this poem
Interesting poem Prashant. Writing poetry is a way to expand the self. a poet friend RH Peat