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I felt so much more. We were - so much more
A wounded heart exposed, on a hard cold floor.
My love stretches upon this star lit night
Fading right before a masked beauty
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never say your sorry about your poems! ! ! they are a part of you and that is why they must always relect you, having said that it is amazing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! and so worth the wait, Amazing poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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7/27/2025 9:40:55 PM # 1.0.0
I absolutely love how you repeated the first phrase throughout the poem. It added a nice flow to it. Amazing. The details can even put an image in my mind, I love it. (: