Monday, November 2, 2015

Feel Your Being Comments

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Be the water and flow down a stream
Be the heart of sea and, in its unity beam
Losing the identity become the ocean
Feel its magic, power and commotion
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C. P. Sharma
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Ratnakar Mandlik 02 November 2015

Sir, it's a very thoughtful, meaningful lyrical write expressing what one should aspire for! Wonderful poem, incorporating pearls of wisdom. Thanks for sharing.10++ Regards. Ratnakar Mandlik

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C. P. Sharma 02 November 2015

Thank you for favouring wit a comment, sir.

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