Feel What I Feel Poem by Zyw Zywa

Feel What I Feel

Rating: 5.0


Under the vine, I dance
with my swan arm one by one
the grapes above our heads
gracefully to your longing mouth
in my lap
.....Do you feel what I feel?

Or does your desire look too far
ahead and is it worried
whether it will stay that way?
I don't know, I don't know
We shall see, you are with me
.....Do you feel what I feel?

The smile in your eyes
sucks me in your heart
that's nice, we kiss
the light of heaven
and the goodness of the earth
.....Do I feel what you feel?

I feel love, and it makes us
beautiful, it makes beautiful
what we do, do not doubt
.....Feel what I feel
.....then I will feel what you feel

Saturday, October 26, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
"Something" (1969, George Harrison)

Celtic symbolism: Muin (the Vine) , that is initiated into sacred knowledge; the Vine should be guided by Tuatha De Danaan (the gods of light and goodness) and the Swan (the symbol of grace and beauty)

Collection "Lilith's Powers" #52
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C F 26 October 2019

What a remarkable poem! Your feelings come across clear and loud through your words.10+

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