Saturday, July 11, 2009

Feel The Space Within! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Felt my life…
With my Senses..
Saw colors vanishing to white…
Heard swaras mixing to music..
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Lakshmi Karat
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Dr Antony Theodore 23 June 2016

Heard swaras mixing to music.. Smelt the fragrance dissolved in air.. ohhhhhh how can i praise enough this wonderful poem....... my God. i read a lot of poems here.. but your poem is unique..... you are very very creative... please write more. eager to read you. tony

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Rachel Butler 28 October 2009

'Smelt the fragrance dissolved in air' Rachel Ann Butler

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Rakesh Bedi 11 July 2009

.....All were in the pot when broken..... excellent conceptualisation! I do not know the poets level of conception(I would like to know) , but to me the whole composition is metaphysical; talking of intangibles than tangibles. Very good Lakshmi, keep it up!

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Catrina Heart 11 July 2009

profound written poem....Great read in depthness...Thanks.......CT

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