Feel The Beats Comments

A simple, sober and beautiful poem...so well dressed!

Great write. Enjoyed.++10- - - - -

A poignant but hopeful write.+++10

Why do you hurt my feelings.. Can't you hear the call, it's weeping The tears are flowing, can you wipe them Come back to me, I am waiting for you.....Brilliantly penned! Thanks for sharing Rini

(part 2) But, as Robert has said, we should have repetitive stanzas to augment the mood. Like the pallavi in film songs repeated again and again... -unnikrishnan

Hi Rini, Lovely write on love and hurt and of course, a painful heart.. Your words bring out the feelings in their entirety. Good! Congrats for the wonderful poem..

'Why you hurt my feelings...'? Love hurts! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

This is a very heartfelt and touching write about feel the beats.