Tuesday, September 22, 2009

Feel So Lonely Without You Comments

Rating: 5.0

This heart was so desolate..
how empty its this soul without you
you attended in my heart
but why you let my heart quiet
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Shawnee Gonzalez 28 September 2009

oh i do like your work keep writing, and express the inner you. srry that was sappy but good job! ♥ §hawnee♥

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 24 September 2009

Welcome to poem hunter! I like your fee style writing. Your words come from your heart. Keep writing.

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Romeo Della Valle 23 September 2009

Welcome to the world of poetry where we freely express our feelings to the whole world, you are not alone, time you have to travel this long journey, youth and stamina to fully withstand the strives that may arrive, nevertheless, you will survive, and let the world know who you really are, hope you read some of my poems written from the bottom of my heart, Love and Peace, Romeo

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Vijay Menon 22 September 2009

its a very nice poem indeed 10+++

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