Friday, August 10, 2012

Feel Sad For Me Comments

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Feel sad for me
The 'death' I feel
For the thing I mourn 
That wasn't real
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Stevie Taite
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Alla Simone 17 October 2012

So warm it felt Though tinged with sorrow A mouth of taste Forbidden to swallow If not for sense And circumstance How fond is felt The backward glance Those are my favorite lines. You've captured the emotion behind unrealized aspirations or unfulfilled hopes very well. Wishes sleep...desires untold...the backward glance. Thanks for sharing.

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Harriet James 10 August 2012

I love the last four lines! !

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Stevie Taite

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