Tuesday, September 10, 2013

Feel Of The Moment! Comments

Rating: 4.2

I look upwards but can't guess what the time is
3. Pm or 4.pm?
The day is waning
The dull quietness is ruling everywhere
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Shahzia Batool
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Patricia Grantham 03 November 2013

The quiet hush of the night has birthed thoughts of a new poem. Even the darkness does not hide the delightful conception of a the next poem about to be born to PH and other members. We welcome the new creation, Well said.

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Amitava Sur 29 October 2013

A lovely elaboration of the setting sun along with the next writing preparation. It's a pleasure to know - keeping the pen ready for capturing the situation............ nice

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Unwritten Soul 23 September 2013

Your mind...wandering again, writing the words from the moment.. ..ah..forget the formality, let just heart speaks and feel the moment..- maybe, maybe this is what you said to self when write this, and yes this write is so good...i have sometimes feel the same..i like your thought_SOul

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Valerie Dohren 19 September 2013

Some beautiful thoughts Shahzia - night-time seems to be the best time for most poets. A lovely read.

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Heather Wilkins 16 September 2013

the pen and paper is always at the ready at 3: 00 am is a good time to write for me. If I wait until dawn all is lost. a good write

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Tribhawan Kaul 15 September 2013

Never forget to keep the pen and the pocket-diary ready For capturing such creative moments divine The human company is not wanted as it might kill some feel of the moment............................how true and a poem is penned.

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Hazel Durham 13 September 2013

Stunning detailed account of twilight scenes that can capture our imagination and result in great creativity!

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Yasmin Khan 12 September 2013

A nice flow of thought like a cascade, last lines are so inspiring. I too loved it dear friend.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 11 September 2013

Once a person is in deep thought and speaks slowly deeply and clearly here my sister is speaking so nicely th and I am listening keeping or having a position hands on cheek honey drips within out as some arrow hit on the comb pierced for the new thought to perceive a new morning so sweet tgank u

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Neela Nath Das 11 September 2013

A beautiful poem Shahzia.The birth of a new poem! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Sallam Yassin 11 September 2013

thoughts of heart on walk on a wander I see and they wait wonderful in seen

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Geetha Jayakumar 11 September 2013

Wow wonderful write..A new poem will fall tonight, the mind is ready to receive..Moment is beautifully captured. Loved the way you penned it Shahzia. Loved it.

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Heather Wilkins 10 September 2013

in the still of the night when all is quiet the mind is filled with thoughts.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 10 September 2013

explore the mystic ruminations Mind receives poems at night. Beautiful poem has come out. Thank you.

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Ramesh Rai 10 September 2013

the moment with an insight like the gale if not captured by ink will say good bye. Super hit.

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Poet's Fan 10 September 2013

wwowowowowowowowowowwowowowowowowowowowo, , , , , , , , , , , , , , am in the magical charm of the moment that the poetess felt and i felt along with her as she took me on the road, , guided me, , showed me how to see and feel the beauty that a poetess of such high sensibility can see, , , , let millions of poems fall from her moist nib of her prolific and beautiful quill.. how inadequate will be poem hunter without shahzia... thanx, , have no words to express what i felt after reading this poem,

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David Wood 10 September 2013

The still quiet of evening as dusk falls and poetic inspiration fills our mind.

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