I look upwards but can't guess what the time is
3. Pm or 4.pm?
The day is waning
The dull quietness is ruling everywhere
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A lovely elaboration of the setting sun along with the next writing preparation. It's a pleasure to know - keeping the pen ready for capturing the situation............ nice
Your mind...wandering again, writing the words from the moment.. ..ah..forget the formality, let just heart speaks and feel the moment..- maybe, maybe this is what you said to self when write this, and yes this write is so good...i have sometimes feel the same..i like your thought_SOul
Some beautiful thoughts Shahzia - night-time seems to be the best time for most poets. A lovely read.
the pen and paper is always at the ready at 3: 00 am is a good time to write for me. If I wait until dawn all is lost. a good write
Never forget to keep the pen and the pocket-diary ready For capturing such creative moments divine The human company is not wanted as it might kill some feel of the moment............................how true and a poem is penned.
Stunning detailed account of twilight scenes that can capture our imagination and result in great creativity!
A nice flow of thought like a cascade, last lines are so inspiring. I too loved it dear friend.
Once a person is in deep thought and speaks slowly deeply and clearly here my sister is speaking so nicely th and I am listening keeping or having a position hands on cheek honey drips within out as some arrow hit on the comb pierced for the new thought to perceive a new morning so sweet tgank u
A beautiful poem Shahzia.The birth of a new poem! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
thoughts of heart on walk on a wander I see and they wait wonderful in seen
Wow wonderful write..A new poem will fall tonight, the mind is ready to receive..Moment is beautifully captured. Loved the way you penned it Shahzia. Loved it.
in the still of the night when all is quiet the mind is filled with thoughts.
explore the mystic ruminations Mind receives poems at night. Beautiful poem has come out. Thank you.
the moment with an insight like the gale if not captured by ink will say good bye. Super hit.
wwowowowowowowowowowwowowowowowowowowowo, , , , , , , , , , , , , , am in the magical charm of the moment that the poetess felt and i felt along with her as she took me on the road, , guided me, , showed me how to see and feel the beauty that a poetess of such high sensibility can see, , , , let millions of poems fall from her moist nib of her prolific and beautiful quill.. how inadequate will be poem hunter without shahzia... thanx, , have no words to express what i felt after reading this poem,
The still quiet of evening as dusk falls and poetic inspiration fills our mind.
The quiet hush of the night has birthed thoughts of a new poem. Even the darkness does not hide the delightful conception of a the next poem about to be born to PH and other members. We welcome the new creation, Well said.