Wednesday, June 4, 2008

Feel My Pain Comments

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i am not asking for much,
i am only asking for your touch.
i am only waiting for you to be,
i am only waiting for you to see.
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Sarah Abu Zeid
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Yousef Wallace 12 April 2009

hey sarah just found ur poems on the net and love them so much keep it up

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Hazem Al Jaber 21 September 2008

beautiful and amazing feelings that what you hold inside your heart for whom you feel in love.. well done sarah.. hazem al..

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Sadiqullah Khan 09 June 2008

fine lines, , , every one will feel your pain after eading this, , , well done

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Kizza Michael 06 June 2008

pain is only felt by the body and not the soul. walk tall

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Mohammad Al-kurdi 06 June 2008

so good poem as it tells a universal story (for my opinion) . great rhyme.............

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Julia Bond 04 June 2008

its pretty good (: I like the rimes

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