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I am willing to go that extra mile
If you offer little smile
I have waited a long
For your happiness if I am not wrong
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Michele Carter, Prem Kumar and Shyla Dominic like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1
its good IFUNANYA ADAEZE OKOLI15 minutes ago The message is clear yet the poem is not so plain. I like it on the over alll but you still need to work on the flow and synergy of the words. Comment +1 nice
Barbara Stump19 minutes ago I like it Comment +1 Too rhyme driven
Jeff Sanftleben19 minutes ago Good message but I think you're forcing a rhyme every line.
I am willing to go that extra mile If you offer little smile
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