Tuesday, August 26, 2014

Feel For All Comments

Rating: 5.0

Feel for all
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Sometimes I think
Of things I have done
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Salini Nair 01 September 2014

Whether it blooms Here or there Leaves same fragrance To the one who tramples on it....love is like that....nice..............

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 August 2014

A wonderful write once again...I want to read this poem in somewhat different way..... Flowers are so innocent that its fragrance can be felt by all, whether one crushes it or one loves it. Our beautiful nature give us everything with love for all but its not in human nature to give and take it back in same way. This is the main difference between human and nature..... Very true said, one feel calm in the midst of nature.... I loved reading each lines...

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Dinesan Madathil 28 August 2014

Love is often treated as a give and take experience of the ordeal of human relations. You have seen reason in upgrading the feel and as a poet with a fine approach to delicate thoughts in life you have once more traced the case of a surging love that stays back amidst us. A fine poem Deepakji.. I give you a sure 10 for it.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 27 August 2014

give love without asking love.. the essence beautifully captured.

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Valsa George 27 August 2014

We can feel for all And give love without asking love……. This is the quintessence of all the teachings of Jesus Christ and all other religious teachers and sages! If we can rise to that level, our life is glorified, no matter what other deficiencies we have! I enjoyed your comparison of a flower! It delights and spreads fragrance equally to those who kiss it or trample it and never discriminates! Only a man of your largesse of heart can accommodate friends and rivals alike! A great write!

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