Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, October 21, 2012

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Your eyes are like wine
Only you enjoy and feel fine
Love is to be enjoyed
Drink it and stay rejoiced
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 October 2012

good drkgbalakrishnan kandangath21 hours ago good Comment 1 Comment+1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 October 2012

Elias Foukis21 hours ago Good poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 October 2012

Some Girl A wonderful write, so true.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 October 2012

nightmute I like the mentioning of taking on certain norms when entering a loving relationship, and that is so very true. But what others, not in a loving relationship, see as a 'ball and chain', we, who are in a loving relationship, understand to be a dignified and, ultimately, a freeing set of rules...we grow deeper in love, and as we grow closer together, we two experience exponential growth. Those not in such a relationship often wonder why such peace and harmony is made so evident in the lives of life-long lovers....and though it is never always peaches and cream, as it were, still we find such joys that those who are not in such a relationship cannot comprehend. A joyous write, sir...and an excellent topic to expound on.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 October 2012

Your eyes are like wine Only you enjoy and feel fine

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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