Feel Deeply With An Invite Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Feel Deeply With An Invite

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Feel deeply with an invite
Tuesday,5th March 2019

It started for the good
I fully understood
what was the message behind
and felt towards her so kind

I could see an urge
the hidden thirst to manage
an affair with me in an earnest
she really tried to test on me

I could visualize the change
on her face and tried not to edge her
but invite in the fold
many things were to be exchanged and told

"No, I am not in the game"
she tried to fool me and tame
"come on, be straight and tell
i directly posed her and she fell for the invite

I could see an opportunity
to be loyal and humanly,
what is wrong in her eyes?
nothing but with purity she tries

"hell or heaven" is in our hands
let us probe it as friends
I hope the end shall always be fine
if we deeply find it as divine

Hasmukh Mehta

Feel Deeply With An Invite
Monday, March 4, 2019
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 March 2019

Dr Sudhansu Dash

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 March 2019

welcome Bhadresh Bhatt

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 March 2019

Bhadresh Bhatt 1 mutual friend Message Haraprasad Mahapatra Haraprasad 17 mutual friends Message

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 March 2019

Tum Yang Hang Limbu 12 mutual friends

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Dillip Swain 04 March 2019

Dear poet start to learn from my poems how to be number one on this site.

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you are no.3. i am number 1 and always at no 10 in ranking. learn to be humble and not rouge ruffian

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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