Feel And Melt Poem by Sara Vechoor

Feel And Melt

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I want to go home

Home where I can feel the leaves

Leaves in my Amma's garden

Garden that tells me "welcome home"

Home is where I sleep

Sleep is when I sink into my bed and melt

Melt in the peace of the place

Place where I no longer be bored

Bored of the countless blessings

Blessings I miss day after day

Day after day, I want to go home

Home where I can feel the leaves.

Feel And Melt
Saturday, December 5, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: garden,home,places
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zehra Bukhari 17 December 2020

Very Beautifully composed.+++ ~Zehra~Young Poet

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Mustafa Test 23 December 2020

Yes veri bitifull

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Nice poem.Welcome to PoemHunter

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Chinedu Dike 05 December 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings from the heart. A beautiful creation ceremoniously rich in tone.

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John Yaws 26 December 2020

The longing for home and safety comes through clearly. Write on!

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me poet yeps poet 24 December 2020

lovely leafy garden congrats to ammmee tell her and u too read my poem...MOM'S SMILES If u pl

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Dr. Antony Theodore 23 December 2020

a very fine poem full of the feeling of being at home. your simplicity attracts

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David Wood 23 December 2020

This is not my poem, why is it put under my name? ? ?

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Gajanan Mishra 23 December 2020

Where I can feel, good write

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