Sunday, October 18, 2009

Feed The Fish Comments

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It's so boring in this tank
back and forth all day long.
i stare out, they stare in.
will they feed me?
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Amberrrr gordon
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Terence Nabbs 19 October 2009

hello amberrrr very funny I like funny poetry terry

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Obinna Eruchie 18 October 2009

How you painted a fish voicing out its boredom, and waiting to be fed. It is an interesting piece.

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