Thursday, May 2, 2019

Feed Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

If his tomcat could speak, he would say.
You think I like to lay at your feet.
But I am only waiting for something to eat.
You think that your affection keeps me warm when I am cold.
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Lamar Cole
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Bernard F. Asuncion 03 May 2019

A noble poem, sir Lamar.....10+++++++++++++

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Pranab K Chakraborty 03 May 2019

Excellent. Unique the expression to hide real hunger. Fantastically exposed the idea of being and nothingness. Skilled hands in poetry very rare create such craft by little words. Thank you much.

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