Thursday, February 21, 2019

Feeble Beauties Comments

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When the breeze blows and flows at dawn,
Swam of bees rise and float in the air.
Coming close, confiding to the flowers,
The lovers rouse them with a soft touch.
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mohanan viswambharan Nair
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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 February 2019

A lovely wonderful poem, Mohanan.......10++++++

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Thanks a lot, Dear sir

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Gajanan Mishra 22 February 2019

rise and float in the air, great write

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Thanks a lot dear sir

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Rajnish Manga 21 February 2019

It's a great masterpiece presenting the two aspects of a man-woman relationship. Thanks, Dear Friend.

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Thanks a lot

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