Sunday, October 14, 2018

Feeble And Freak Comments

Rating: 4.5

Today I am feeling lonely
Lonely like a stork in the pond
My limbs are feeling weak
Like before I am not a vagabond
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Anil Kumar Panda
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M Asim Nehal 22 October 2018

A very hopeful poem, I know waiting time is too long but it pays, I quote: 10+++ Sitting here in my dark room I am waiting for the light outside Light of lasting peace and love that Will give me a life of honor and pride

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Anil Kumar Panda 23 October 2018

That is a very nice compliment Sir. Appreciated.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2018

Unless the grace of God one feels weak, feeble and trouble. If God will be with him or her there will be peace. Taking this theme you have inscribed a beautiful poem. The last stanza is much impressive. Thanks for sharing.10

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 October 2018

God has always shown the path to the weak and hungry. Thanks very much Sir.

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