Saturday, October 6, 2012

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A plethora of teeth and happiness erupts explosively from your face,
Concealing ever so effectively, the struggle of your grace,
Inside your soul the foundations are withering away,
An inevitable downfall that effects you each and every day,
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Meghan S.E Newton
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Meghan Newton 14 October 2012

Thank you! I appreciate the positive feedback and the knowledge that someone is actually reading my poems :) Glad you enjoyed.

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Maryelle Anthony 12 October 2012

This is one of the poems that caught me with it's first two words. The verse about inspiration is more than true, the poem as such is short but brilliant.

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