Wednesday, September 30, 2009

February Comments

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The cherry reflection of her smeared lipstick on the glass danced like fire
in a kindred colored wine.
Sad sips of sherry
In the distance, the setting sun ablaze on the horizon’s edge;
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Tai Chi Italy 07 October 2009

Valentines is traditionally for lovers...weather lightening strikes twice, is a blessing. We live, we love, we die, but never should we regret, not doing what we know we can do. February as a title! seems odd but interestingly linked to valentines, I feel for you as its a cold month traditionally...unless you have the warmth to the fire, as I do. Smiling at you Tai

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Some Body 05 October 2009

Nice use of analogies in this poem, i loved it. keep writing.

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