Sunday, August 18, 2013

Feathers Of Memories Comments

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Last night my slumber didn't come to this cage
Restless I was, strolled and looked through haze
Unwinked eyes with calm breeze till crimson red
Waited the bird to come and put me in my bed |
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Heather Wilkins 19 August 2013

the dawn will come with new hope for the future. tomorrow will be better nice title

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Heather Wilkins 19 August 2013

the dawn will come with new hope for the future. tomorrow will be better nice title

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David Wood 19 August 2013

We have to cling on to hope as sometimes that is all there is. Lovely poem.

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Valsa George 19 August 2013

The sun sets in the evening only to rise the next morn! If loneliness and depression darken your days now, hope that there would soon be the dawn of sunshine and sweet warmth! What is needed is the ability to cling on to hope, even when we are drowning! A very poignant write! !

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Sallam Yassin 18 August 2013

suffering and pain in his way god teaching us where the righteous path in the journey of the life and the deep faith in god every pain will become a grace like Abraham's fire taste who became a heaven for the days and nights he resided there/ great piece and deep message

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