Thursday, December 28, 2006

Feathered Pillow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Another smack
I start to bleed
As a child of ten
Is this what I need
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Matt Mondschein
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Patricia Gale 17 May 2007

Sad experience that is too true for some, well penned

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Charley60 K 28 December 2006

Your writing flowed, sad it is for pain experienced by a child-at the hands of a parent is the deepest pain ever to have. The feeling of being unsecure and wondering when the next pain will be felt. It was a good write, although sad.

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