Friday, September 25, 2009

Feathered Dreams. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dreaming of nest-hungry season again
Soon, she glided the lake,
....................................eyed her cygnets.
Pondered, 'though dimly,
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Fay Slimm
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that whihc they make it.. fay i like the form, fitting! ! i like the poem.

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Bob Gibson 26 September 2009

Stumbling, tumbling, awkward of gait running, flapping, wings out straight steering, fearing, getting it right a cygnet on a maiden flight!

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Carol Gall 25 September 2009

lovely write new feathered dreams great fay 10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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