Wednesday, March 22, 2017

Feather In The Wind Comments

Rating: 4.5

Drifting like a feather in the wind,
Being carried here and there,
In love's windstorm, around I'm spun,
Like a prisoner of the air
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Bri Edwards 15 January 2018

Lora, Twisting And Turning, All Day Long Twisting and turning, she's out of control, Surrender is now Lora's only recourse. The winds of love WILL have their way, and their way shall lead to intercourse! ok, i won't submit this one. :))) yours, to MyPoemList. another terrific write by YOU! ! bri :)

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Bri Edwards 15 January 2018

some favorite lines: Like a prisoner of the air....what are ya? a balloon? ? while checking out (all) the definitions of tread, i found this one: TREAD: (of a male bird) to copulate with (a female bird) . (TO be continued) ....

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Tom Allport 05 April 2017

a poem that is full of feathery freedoms? .............well penned.

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