Feather Comments

I really like this poem, Annette. I am going to mention it in Puzzle Master Quiz 050, to be posted day after tomorrow.

Feather white feather bright thanks for visiting me tonight in comfort, I shall rest at peace knowing that one day we'll meet. wonderful great 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

thanks for correcting angel spellings. ha ha. and, AGAIN, I REALLY liked: Feather white feather bright lovingly waltzing into sight i'm sure i must have sent to MyPoemList, but i'll do it again to be sure! wonderful poem. bri :)

I loved this poem, it's so pretty and touching [3

Angelic poem, really nicely written.

For ever more! ! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing.

This is awesome poetry! Concept, rhyming, and flow are excellent. Like to read again and again. Thanks for sharing.

Life Spread Carried Upon Divine Wind Creation Word Gift feathers grace curved nature engineered unique flowing into crafted design masterful mystique beauty style sustained symmetry life diversity complexity astounds each space creature crafted perfectly follows precise preordained life paths each ecosystem established intricate global follows a habitat physical environment pattern communities interacting organisms biological as dessert mountain rain forest differing design arise perceive lift take flight upon spread beating snow white wings of an angel carried upon divine wind creation word gift Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Feather' by the poet Annette Aitken. Dedicated to the poet Annette Aitken.

Elegance, grace, crafted simplicity and rhyme sustain without suffocation and terns the poetic piece masterfully unique.

'Feather white feather bright fell from angels wing tonight surfing gently to the floor by my side for ever more.' your first two lines unique flowing into the next two was masterful with crafted simplicity, a beautiful style sustained throughout the poem, and now I must arise lift take flight upon the snow white wings of an angel carried on the gift of your words :) another 10+

A gem of a poem with such a beautiful flow and perfect rhyming, well done Annette you have talent!

as you may have noticed from other comments, you've mixed up spellings of angel and angle. but i suppose some angels have angles! Feather white feather bright lovingly waltzing into sight...........i love these lines. - - - - - - - - - - - with feather pink i write with ink feathery verse of a cute nurse. silly. bri ;)

Angels would be proud of your lovely poem flowing with grace and elegance, I read both of your poems and like your style of writing, thanks for posting, as regards angels and writing poetry..read my poem colors if you would like. Thanks for posting and keep writing.

Feather white feather bright thanks for visiting me tonight in comfort I shall rest at peace knowing that one day we'll mee... the falling of the feather and the satisfaction that my guardian angel has arrived unawares makes u so happy. it is evident in your poem...... i too believe in angels...... that faith protects me.. in my life..... thank you my dear for this poem of faith...... tony