Saturday, April 28, 2012

Fears Not More Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart was deceived
By a weaker tongue
That was bound by captivity,
A feeble voice
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Romeo Della Valle
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Cristano Ronaldo 23 April 2018

I am rich. And I know for a fact that this writer sucks.

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Miraj Patel 21 July 2012

beautifully framed... And awesome write... Descibes fear and also to over come it... Love your poems..

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Rachellle Meyers 19 May 2012

This is a really beautiful poem! thank you for writing and sharing it. The emotion behind the words is very eloquent and I just love it!

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Kayode Orogbemi 09 May 2012

Reali gud sire... Reali without strain of comprehension..gud piece.. i fear nt more in reading ur poems.*smiling*

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Salma Torrez 07 May 2012

My life regained its strength again And feeling happy with you, The woman of my dream Beautiful 10++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Eric Cockrell 06 May 2012

love frees the captive heart, and brings meaning! very good poem.

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<3 Nom Nom Nom <3 05 May 2012

Again, I love your poems Romeo; this one very romantic and very well written. Its like you put your emotions into each sentence of your piece. I love it.

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Heather Wilson 05 May 2012

Wow, that was a wonderful poem! . Lovely romantic theme, nice very nice.

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Jessica Lee 04 May 2012

This is a nice poem here :) A really great poem, I like the 5th stanza in this poem :)

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Pheko Motaung 02 May 2012

The wonderful fantastic imagery.Powerful skillfully woven words.A truly outstanding brilliancy.Thank you Romeo

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Tijan Kah 02 May 2012

amazing poetry , keep it up

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Oladehinde J Ibikunle 02 May 2012

You are a great intrest stimulator, One would hardly believe it 's a love poem untill the last five lines

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Richard Lackman 30 April 2012

Romeo, I thought this was very powerful. Your descriptions of your lowest feelings were very touching. You always do a great job of expressing your emotions with clarity. Your imagery is really creative. Great work. Dick Lackman.

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John Dowdall 30 April 2012

Excellent. Near death is the transcendent place which exists in the experience. No explaination given or needed. It just is. The most important moment in a lifetime. Think Jesus on the cross. The world disolving. The doorway between existing in this universe and the momentary perception of other. Temporal time to time of properties unknown at the moment of passing.

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Allemagne Roßmann 29 April 2012

Impeccable version on life and its exquisite narration.I specially like the verses From my weaken lungs And getting then trapped Within a building vanishing Slowly from the horizon... Its like the life on the beaten track and its concurrence with another lives and then the comparitives find verses of their own.Superb write

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Valerie Dohren 29 April 2012

Beautiful poem, very romantic and visionary.

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Louis Rams 28 April 2012

she was the light that shone the way, and your silence was stripped away.

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Romeo Della Valle

Romeo Della Valle

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