My heart was deceived
By a weaker tongue
That was bound by captivity,
A feeble voice
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beautifully framed... And awesome write... Descibes fear and also to over come it... Love your poems..
This is a really beautiful poem! thank you for writing and sharing it. The emotion behind the words is very eloquent and I just love it!
Reali gud sire... Reali without strain of comprehension..gud piece.. i fear nt more in reading ur poems.*smiling*
My life regained its strength again And feeling happy with you, The woman of my dream Beautiful 10++++++++++++++++++++++++
love frees the captive heart, and brings meaning! very good poem.
Again, I love your poems Romeo; this one very romantic and very well written. Its like you put your emotions into each sentence of your piece. I love it.
Wow, that was a wonderful poem! . Lovely romantic theme, nice very nice.
This is a nice poem here :) A really great poem, I like the 5th stanza in this poem :)
The wonderful fantastic imagery.Powerful skillfully woven words.A truly outstanding brilliancy.Thank you Romeo
You are a great intrest stimulator, One would hardly believe it 's a love poem untill the last five lines
Romeo, I thought this was very powerful. Your descriptions of your lowest feelings were very touching. You always do a great job of expressing your emotions with clarity. Your imagery is really creative. Great work. Dick Lackman.
Excellent. Near death is the transcendent place which exists in the experience. No explaination given or needed. It just is. The most important moment in a lifetime. Think Jesus on the cross. The world disolving. The doorway between existing in this universe and the momentary perception of other. Temporal time to time of properties unknown at the moment of passing.
Impeccable version on life and its exquisite narration.I specially like the verses From my weaken lungs And getting then trapped Within a building vanishing Slowly from the horizon... Its like the life on the beaten track and its concurrence with another lives and then the comparitives find verses of their own.Superb write
she was the light that shone the way, and your silence was stripped away.
I am rich. And I know for a fact that this writer sucks.