Wednesday, March 19, 2008

Fears: All Kinds Comments

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Fearing sterility
he refuses to give up
as a rusted metal piece
he feels he will end up.
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sreelekha premjit
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Abha Sharma 29 March 2008

postpones cooking phantom ghosts of misformed cakes, upalatable......... wonderful imagery... All fears are so predictable that the negative anticipation does not let us try to venture. Good one

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Aasiq the poet 19 March 2008

wonderful lesson here.your lines have a lilt of their own.they reverberate. thanks sree.

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