Monday, June 27, 2011

Fears Comments

Rating: 5.0

There are few things that frighten me but what do are quite severe,
Until I experience those things, what they are remains unclear,
I guess from dealing with little fear it swells inside me,
Because when I'm scared I have little sensibility,
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Adrian Shorey
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 27 June 2011

Nice poem. I liked it. It was written well with great texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Best regards Akmal

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Waterville ME
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