Fears in heart, fears in mind,
For them reason I can't find;
Fears in love, and of unknown,
Of the wind and what may blow:
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Marvelous two ending lines, ending the beautiful poem on a high note.
A touching sestet. Well crafted, dear Ma’am Mihaela...10++
A wonderful sestet so brilliantly penned....endearing expression! I derive immense pleasure in reading this beautiful poem time and again to my utmost satisfaction!
So beautiful mam.....I loved your last two lines the most..the pillow knows only the fear which is absorbing the tears in silence....it is when we cry silently hiding from others......very beautifully expressed...i love to read it again and again...
Fear well explained, the cure to this I agree would be love; A warm embrace, a gentle touch...
excellent poem- like to quote A warm embrace, a gentle touch, To mine heart would mean so much; To reassure and wash fears away,
A warm embrace, a gentle touch, To mine heart would mean so much -I appreciate the lovely expression! It's my pleasure reading it time and again!
Fear is such a confusing human nature. It creeps and clings even in the oddest moments in human existence. Thanks for sharing your thoughts on fears dear poet.
Yet, my pillow only knows my fears: In secret silence, absorbing tears....very true lines.....nice poem
“Fears in heart, fears in mind/For them reason I can't find/Fears in love, and of unknown/Of the wind and what may blow/Sleepless nights covered in worry/For myself I feel so sorry”…..and on and on………….your expression moves like a murmuring river! An adorable piece of poetry!
While reading this poem I am reminded of Edvard Munch famous painting 'The Scream.' Humans (and for that matter animals too) are born with the innate feeling of fear which manifests in us through logical and illogical thoughts and at other times for reasons quite inexplicable. This is truly an enchanting poem and can be a rich tribute the the great painting 'The Scream.'
A great poem about the intricacies of human mind and its unwanted wanderings without reason. The poem exactly narrates the situation in apt words and it is a fine one.
He who loves knows no fears Doubt in love always tears True love is ever full of cheers Love is the boat that steer clear
A great poem.Take into notice that I do not find a word generous for poems not deserving the character of a real poem. And this is a real poem.In a poetical ton like painting a feeling in a canvas.
'Fears in heart, fears in mind, For them reason I can't find; Fears in love, and of unknown, ' so much to ponder love appreciate in this wonderful poem, we all echo your fears with love or loved ones lost in the cycle of life lessons, like your pillow we know your fears, through your words readers poets friends love you :) 10+++
I enjoyed your poem about fears and loneliness. Your expression of desire for human connection to 'assure and wash fears away' is a lovely sentiment. Thanks for sharing. Peace.
I like it so much, in our loneliness we are with alone God. So all the joy in our heart must filled. Thank you for sharing this great poem.
I love this poem. It's well narrated. A lot of thanks dearest poet Mihaela Pirjol.
Profound poetry. " I feel the absence /Of someone with whom to share /This aching fear: —it's so unfair! ". How do I express my hearts reverberations on reading these lines.