Wednesday, April 15, 2009

Fears Comments

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SAM Mitsuki 15 April 2009

'like little voices stepping on your tongue.' That's great.

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Brittanie Thornton 15 April 2009

Ok, you want criticism, I think this could be better with some spacing.=]haha

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Brittanie Thornton 15 April 2009

WOW! ! I love the rhyme and description, it is amazing!

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