Thursday, September 11, 2008

Fearness Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Far away but seem closed
Night became more dark
Bird won't fly... winds won't make a wish
Scared...Fear
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Fee Chen
fear fly together
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Ivan Donn Carswell 11 September 2008

this is an expressive poem which needs to be liberated. I'm not sure to whom or where I place the message but what you've written needs to edited to let the message flow free... Rgds, Ivan

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Tom Balch 11 September 2008

A well penned, deep and meaningful piece, well done Fee, regards Tom

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Fee Chen

Fee Chen

Surabaya, indonesia
Fee Chen
Fee Chen
Surabaya, indonesia
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