Friday, March 10, 2017

Fearless Sleep Comments

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When I was standing,
it was standing with me,
when I was sitting,
it was sitting with me,
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Anil Kumar Panda 14 March 2017

This is beautiful poem. when you started dreaming me, the evil ran away. is a beautiful line. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 March 2017

Well envisioned poem. Thanks.

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Khalida Bano Ali 12 March 2017

A great thoughtful poem..........................................................

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The first four lines seem to be superb, nice writing.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 11 March 2017

The length of arms adore mind to embrace emotion either in dream or in reality with lovable attitudes. The charm of love propels evil thought and love does magic as charming hope whispers mind. Remaining fearless is wise. Love makes life fearless. An excellent poem is well crafted...10

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