Fearless Equestrienne Comments

his iron shield won't stand my sword it's honor for me and it's pleasure for you to take me where my funeral will be done do my losses prove my love for you? .if it helps to remove misgivings and prove real feelings thenmany would have done it...it does not workkk but honestly speaking it matters moer if we prove worth to it rather than offer funeral....lovely n great write....10 watched helplessly....come hjome..no separate ways...

Stunning imagery and well formed verses...........great diction and imagery..10/10