Fear Setting Us Free Comments
What if I were to almost die tonight
Would you restore my damn failing sight
Would you sharpen the old man's hearing
And correct the veering steering
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Very cleverly written :) I love rhymes so I may be a bit bias, but you covered so many scenerios of real fears, and so many one can relate to because of a friend or a family member. But I liked that despite all the tragic events that could happen one just wants someone to love and to be loved :)
Thank you so much, Sister Frances for your honesty and positive feedback.
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7/29/2025 9:54:09 AM # 1.0.0
I would take care of you Rich