Fear's Defeat In Flight Comments

The main message about the cleansing breeze is lovely. Some hastiness in the last stanza can be improved. Please avoid the many abstract descriptions. You may think of nature and refer to her details if you need. The flight of the birds, the rain, the Universe, the sky at night, the streams, rivulets and brooks, all can become details in beautiful poems. I smile at you and expect you to come back and write soon. G.