Saturday, October 14, 2017

Fear Of Trains Comments

Rating: 5.0

autumn rain is akin to black tea,
the burnt yellow of old growth watered;

a train shakes the fields, an old carpet snapping
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Leslie Philibert
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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2017

A train shakes the fields during rain and train trembles looking rainy sky. Air hums with steel. Fearful expression is brilliantly done here. This is amazing and excellent poem shared here.10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 October 2017

Such an interesting poem, Leslie.....10++++

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Leslie Philibert

Leslie Philibert

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