Monday, March 12, 2012

Fear Of The Unknown. Comments

Rating: 3.5

Like the knight of sleeping beauty,
He slashes through my heart.
Tearing down my courage,
Shattering my resolve like a wine glass.
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Melody Iveren Kuku
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Emily Oldham 14 July 2012

Great atmosophere in this piece, it builds really well. Some beautiful phrases. Keep writing!

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Dave Walker 12 March 2012

A really great poem, like it, great write.

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Melody Iveren Kuku

Melody Iveren Kuku

Lagos, Nigeria.
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