Fear Of Life Comments

Oooooo i like this one, excellent. Very well writen n a very nice ryme to it,2 out of 2 Ive read so far and both are awsome. I love all the key points, the way you've created a subtle picture in the back of my mind of todays life and the way we live. I can relate to it aswel. Your a very talented writer.

VERY similar to the dark, contradictory style I tend to use. I like what you're conveying, but (like me) you seem a bit repetitive at times. Pretty good, I'll give it a 6.