Tuesday, March 29, 2016

Fear Of Drowning Comments

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A cool wetness met my feet.
It crept up to my knees.
And pass my waist.
I should panic, now
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Val Brooklyn Rogers
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Chinedu Dike 04 February 2017

Fear is a bunch of sinister shadows. A shadow has no substance, it's usually a magnified reflection of something small, that's why upon facing fear squarely, we usually find it inconsequential. In the poem, you aptly captured the panicking state of mind of one about to drown. Lovely indeed.

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