Fear Of Death Comments

I am a confirm sinner, and God’s mercy is my only hope of redemption. Wonderful write and deep faith and emotions

I am confirm sinner and God 's mercy is only hope of redemption Nicely crafted poem. I loved. Please read and comment on my poem dear frog.

Brilliant write with inspired lines and amazing depth of emotions unleashed in a triumph of mastery of words!

This is simply amazing. Death is a chilling thought. There's no escape from it. You have put the feelings of every mortal being with regard to death here. This poem strikes a chord with everyone. Well-worded and well-crafted.

Well penned the eternal truth...There is no escape from the doom ordained.. Thanks for sharing

What a to the point on feelings poem! Absolutely love it. Great write! !

Fear of death is not a bad thing. It inspires us for good deeds and to do our job well in time.

Fear and angst of an impending death is beautifully relayed. The last two lines, humbly confessing the predicament of a sinner and leaving his fate to God's mercy is a provocative conclusion. Enjoyed it. Thank you. Rate 10.

you capture the fear of death brilliantly....AND YOUR HOPE IS CLEAR.

It's a very good poem coming from the pen of a poet who is still young in life. But there is another way of looking at death. Perhaps you've read my poem 'Adieu'. If not, you may like to read it.

Nice poem, beautiful closing line.

wow..no wonder..the memory of death lurks around..but yours is intense and scarier..for all the crimes committed both by tongue and hands..a maker more powerful than all waits at the gate of our lives..nice

Intense emotions sizzling with a passion to live with God's eternal mercy to help you along the journey to see the light of God's love falling gently from the sky! Brilliant write and thank you for sharing!

i pray to god for he gives his bless and always the sweet words fall from your lucky pen. Thank you brother.

very intense piece but sad too God is he who forgives the true repentant.

Just sent a comment on your poem and gave u a big 10 Would you please read my poem „ If you die before me” and sent me your comments and vote it. I did it for you now. Thank you very much God bless you. Tony

perpetual inferno ugly inferno gapes at me Guilt’s ugly face has chilled my footsteps I am a confirm sinner, and God’s mercy is my only hope of redemption. These last verses are your key enter the heaven’s door Very nice. I liked it very much. thank you tony

I think we are our own harshest critic sometimes with are flaws being more outstanding than than good in us. Thankyou.

Very intense depiction of death as it takes one from life without warning. Our lives are only temporary, we don't think much about it as we do what we want, forgetting that sins are known already by God. As you have stated in your poem, 'God's mercy is my only hope of redemption'. Excellent poem Shakil! Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

The image of death is depicted astoundingly with wisely chosen words. Great write!