Sunday, November 29, 2009

Fear Of Commitment/The Godless Captain Comments

Rating: 5.0

You taught me love
When you let me hold you
With my fingerless gloves
And my old hat askew
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Jack Williams
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Jack Williams 07 December 2009

'Bon voyage' should really be in italics, but, irritatingly, Poemhunter doesn't do italics! Thanks for your wonderful comments.

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Bob Gibson 02 December 2009

Commitments, acceptance of what's in your heart when you can't bear each moment, that you are apart sweet nothings and kisses, oh! so divine love grows with commitment, love grows with time Loved your poem Jack!

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Patti Masterman 29 November 2009

This is something else, Jack. I love all the ideas drifting through here. You will never be ethereal at PH, don't fear (smile)

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