Thursday, June 19, 2014

Fear Of Chains Comments

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Let me show you my chains
so that you can show me yours too!
Are your chains made from gold?
Come see our chains,
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Doris Dzameshie
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Christian Hudak 19 June 2014

Wow, beautiful poem! Short, but the farthest thing from simple! Truly great (: I invite you to check out some of my own, and leave any advise for me as a writer, I would greatly appreciate it! Sincerely - Christian Hudak

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