Tuesday, November 25, 2008

Fear Lurks Comments

Rating: 5.0

When fear lurks,
The shadows come to life,
Dancing demons,
Swaying to and fro.
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Ron Flowers 18 December 2008

Fantastic description of fear. Ron

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Much truth in here.... evocative and well-penned. t x

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Nice nice nice.. I love the wording.. Dan

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Rebekah Arwood 25 November 2008

A very convincing poem and easy to relate to. I almost got shivers at the 'nails on chalk board.' Well done!

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Callie Carroll 25 November 2008

Keep on, girl. I am enjoying your poems.

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