Wednesday, April 30, 2008

Fear In A Handful Of Dust Comments

Rating: 3.8

I am afraid of Failures………
I am afraid of Destiny……..
I am afraid of Death………
I am afraid of loosing you my love.
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Abha Sharma
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C. P. Sharma 19 May 2008

A good psycho analysis with the wonderful poetic touch to it. The following lines very well summ up everything: Confront it with the absolute TRUTH And breathe the powerful currant of air, This heroic adventure will drive away The immoral falsehood of ghastly tear

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Emancipation Planz 09 May 2008

You right of a steadfast straight dart... from a hand that can clasp not just fear but of insightfulness that transcends any dust storm that may blow over humankind

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Philip Housiaux 09 May 2008

Sort of like great reflective piece meets practical life aphorism. I studied it and saved it as a poem to learn from. Very strong work.

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C. P. Sharma 08 May 2008

You use the technical objective correlatives in your poems with great dexterity. They give the 20st century touch to your poetry. A great poem.

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Lynda Robson 08 May 2008

Truth and fearlessness are good adages, a wonderful poem about facing up to life's trials and tribulations, well done, Lynda xx

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 07 May 2008

i'd always appreciates your works sharma. you keep going girl!

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Rani Turton 06 May 2008

Fears can take on a dimensions that can be devastating. face them and carry on... good work, Abha.

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Greenwolfe 1962 06 May 2008

A very creative and sensitive writing that displays philosophical wisdom which I like. GW62

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Sadiqullah Khan 06 May 2008

yea that fresh air breath.................nice poem sharma

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 04 May 2008

Never be afraid to live your life... Andrew 10

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Leonard Daranjo 04 May 2008

'Do the things you fear and the death of fear is certain' wrote Ralph Waldo Emerson. This is great stuff and absolutely true. The maggot of fear feeds on the fearful; in the heart of the courageous, there is no room for fear. It took a man no less than Gandhi not only to prove this to the world but to bring his oppressors to their knees. Take care...

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I'll second what Allie says, below. t x

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Alison Cassidy 03 May 2008

This could almost have been written for me at the moment. Thank you. You're absolutely right. The pathway of fear is illusory and usually inaccurate in it's heart thumping projections, whereas the place beyond the fear remains a constant expression of love. No matter what. Beautifully expressed poetry. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Janri Gogeshvili 03 May 2008

Very beautifully, at once grasps, has felt inflow 'magic' energy … thanks...

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Andrew Blakemore 03 May 2008

A very strong and powerfully written piece Abha, loved the ending. Best wishes, Andrew

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Rema Prasanna 03 May 2008

Abha, I liked this work, strong and powerful, let fear elude from society, let truth win

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When the mind’s mechanics of man Are thumped in a quagmire of fear, Abha Awesome

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Vidi Writes 01 May 2008

Take anything into account The core issue of ‘Fear’ is Loss of love. Love – Between humans Love for birds and animals Love for name and fame Love for comforts and luxuries Love for money Love for games Love for…. An endless list it is. Hence hold tenderly that which you Love, Tight grip may crush it. Love Lost. The fear of loss cause you to hold it tight But the chances are, it's holding you too When you are tender with it. Thank you for this nice poem on Fear.

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Flora Gillingham 01 May 2008

The greatest far is of fear itself, I suppose. Conquer that and all else seems more manageable. Enjoyed the poem, Abha, as always. Fx

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Kesav Easwaran 01 May 2008

once you are armed with truth you turn fearless...a lesson taught by Mahatma- meaning great soul- Gandhi to the whole world. the poem also recites the importance of self confidence and belief in God

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