Thursday, June 6, 2013

Fear And Reality Comments

Rating: 5.0

I always knew the time would come,
To face it all again,
I always knew deep in my heart,
That fate would call your name.
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 June 2022

This war is so unkind....no human being likes war. A perceptive poem.5 stars.

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Jayne Davies 24 June 2013

Thank you both, I'm so pleased with your kind comments!

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Patricia Grantham 22 June 2013

We are never at rest until we see our loved faces again. Freedom comes at a price and we all must sometimes pay. This touched my heart. A passionate write.

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Divya Gupta 06 June 2013

Very heart touching poem..highly appreciated it sir.. It shows the utmost love, care and worridness for the dear one.. Plz do read my poem.. M new and need your suggestions: -) .. Thanx

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Jayne Davies 06 June 2013

Thank you so much Kavya x your kind words mean a lot!

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Kavya . 06 June 2013

such a nice poem.....v emotional and deeply moved by each and every line! very well written! v true that the fears run wild until we have our loved ones in our arms.........the mind starts wandering to places it should not, as we fear losing our loved one!

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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