Monday, December 6, 2004

Fear And Intuition Comments

Rating: 4.2

That night I heard your voice
it woke me,
bolted through my body
like electricity does wet feet.
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Amberlee Carter
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Adryan Barnathan 07 April 2005

Amberlee I have been meaning to give your poems the time and observation that they deserve. This poem is a piece of work...nicely done...and I love the last lines...it sewed it up for me!

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Andrew Jones 12 January 2005

Wow, I don't even know what to say. Stunning.

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