Friday, January 6, 2017

Fear Comments

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FEAR BY GOLDEN O

Slowly she loses grip on her senses
The tears hidden behind her lenses
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Saadat Tahir 09 January 2017

its a lovely poem... i always like hope filled poems and this is it... life is so unpredictable and throws so much at us... only if we keep the little amber inside glowing.... nice liked :) sat

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Golden Nkemdirim 10 January 2017

thank you so very much. hope is spring eternal.

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Terry Craddock 06 January 2017

'Slowly she loses grip on her senses The tears hidden behind her lenses Frozen like the weather... A little bit of pain... A little bit of despair... A little bit of insanity... A whole lot of fear... ' exquisite, you had me from the first exceptional lines

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Golden Nkemdirim 09 January 2017

thank you so much. i appreciate your feed back. God bless

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Gajanan Mishra 06 January 2017

freedom is there in living

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Golden Nkemdirim 09 January 2017

yes you are right. i choose freedom so i can live.

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