My heart stops...
Then speeds away faster than a bullet from a gun
Ringing, beating pounding through me like screams of terror
Paralysed by panic and lost in time all consuming fear blinds me
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When we go through this kind of crises, writing it out in a poem can be work as some relief. I think it is an excellently written piece full of emotion. Please keep writing poetry. You are good!
A nice poetic imagination, Jodie. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks