Monday, November 4, 2013

Fear Comments

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I was afraid to get close to you,
Afraid I would crave your touch,
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Lora Colon
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Bri Edwards 21 July 2015

the word crescendo somehow came to mind, so i looked it up an i think it fits. and the finale is just about as bad as it can get. didn't i send the last one (of your poems that i read) to MyPoemList? i'm afraid if i send two such poems in a row, my list may flee in fear of receiving another. oh well, i'll give it a try. thanks for sharing. hopefully sharing will help to lighten your load. bri :)

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Charles Darnell 27 November 2013

An eternal risk of romance. I have read only a few of your pieces, but I can appreciate the accessibilty of your work. Sometimes I think some writers are deliberately obscure in order to sound deep. I think this is a mistake and pushes many people away from poetry. Your work touches on universal themes and is presented in a clear and easily understood manner.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 05 November 2013

the end line breaks my heart, the gripping sadness!

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Lora Colon

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